Both of you guys need to elevate.
Use metas to connect your punches.
Anyways..

Hardhitter definetly took this with better flow.. hard hitting punches.. and staying consistent with it. Wordplay was lacked.. No good wordplay in this battle worth mentioning. No stand out lines either.. So I'm not going to mention any. You both have potential though. Keep your head up and read some battles in LLL.. that'll help you out.

V/ Hard Hitter

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