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Old 01-23-04, 10:25 PM   #2
Trapt Wit
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Kaos takes this.

Before you go on me hating on you BI, read both verses.
Your flow fell off in a couple places and some of the wordplay was weak.
You need to work on using metaphors without making them stand out as a metaphor so much
Battling is about being witty without drawing attention to your metas and wordplay/

Kaos... you had some played shit in there but I liked how you stayed personal in most of your punches


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