sounds like you got some deep emotions for this girl... I feel you right their mang... last year I had some issues with a women I've been with since high-school... I've wrote a lot of that type of shit. Really helps you vent, and put your emotions and thoughts down on paper.

So I can relate to this... the structure was good, and considering the subject matter it was an all around good piece. Wasn't really any creative or outstanding in there, but the emotion was the best part.'

peep one of my drops mang and stay up

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