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Old 01-24-04, 01:07 AM   #2
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ok intro sounds...weird...

1st verse is ok...rhymes not that great...flow is off a little bit at certain parts...no overdubs...they'd help it alot...

2nd verse is kinda monotone....sounds like fabolous with less emotion...no overdubs again...man overdubs are great, they can make an emotionless verse like this sound 10 times better...I like the way each verse ends the same

ok song gets all weird...ok a good beat kicking in...lol seems like bloodshott realized he was the only one that was gonna rip the track so he needed a diffrentbeat to rap on....overdubs would help this verse too, but it atleast has good delivery...

overall a pretty good track....Bloodshots part ripped it tho...the beat and everything on that verse was sicc.....

7.0 tho..for lack of emotion by the other 2 kats...

peace
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