Hottie: Your verse was wayyy stretched, work on your structure, like 13th said

blah blah blah blah setup
blah blah multi blah punch

it works more efficient that way, it flows better, and the punch is easier read and understood that way.

TR: Nice opener, had a nice structure and you had better punches, which was enough to pull the win

V/ TR

sorry Hottie, but he took this...