good beat..but I have a feeling this is gonna ruin the song lol...we'll see tho...that damn high pitched screaming is horrible..(I'm listening to "Athens Shawty remix)...what the fuck is this shit? 54 seconds and no rapping, just some stupid high pitched inaudible screaming...

ok the original one sounds better so far....1st guy is ok..not the greatest....no overdubs..sounds a little monotone...not much for flow either....that stupid high pitched inaudible shit is back...jesus...lol...u want to make people "crunk" (since that's ur style) not "in pain"...

neway....work on some shit...not horrible tho..

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