yo.....
fuck the chit chat.....ill up an' cock the 5th back...
show ur brain CONSTIPATION....and blow that SHIT back...
follow through is sort of played.. The opening is alright
so dont talk when u round me.....ill kill u...and turn ur flesh......
into GROUND beef....now u in the ground SLEEP!
not really a strong punch in this bar, it was an alright attemp but could have been worded better to have more direction
u fake....who u THUGGIN to be?.....
i can kick a freestyle.......longa then ya DOUBLE CD....
follow through isnt bad, kind of played, not much
for this....u know that i won in time....u could kick 100 ryhmes...
still wont be equalvalint to ONE of mine.....
not feeling this bar though. seemed like a filler you tryed making a punch. didnt really come out to hard,
im TAKIN da GAME for RANSOM....u writin a CHECK...
fuck ya brain when i spit....ill AIM right for ya kneck...
the meta is decent. but the follow through needed more in a punch. ending could ave been better





Kaos Theory Hova got a patent for Jay ya Know.. Nova just copied his rights
Taking tha game for ransom? He hasn't stole anything in his life
opening is alright. the punch is decent, follow through is ok
Wtf? Is that piss? Oh wait..Its J coming more yellow than daisys
Below wack?
Maybe.. I bet his punches are more played.. than Avy's for Jay-Z
good follow through punch, meta is alright, personal is good
Kids spittin those shit rhymes.. pound for pound ya bound to lose
In a crew full of Mimes.. No wonder ya rep is based on untold truth
follow through is an alright personal
J's tha bottom of my feet.. Its just that.. only tha superior will win
Nova's talent is like his sig.. Except that theres no light that leaks in
not getting this bar. should have worded it a little better, follow through is alright
Could be Halle Berry.. still not as fine as me.. face it kid ya dying breed
Ya Gay..Jay Nova stays on Hova's cock..and his rock fell on ya Dynasty
ending is alright. the personal is alright, meta is ok

over all you had a good verse, the punchs were there pretty constint. you had alright personals. The metaphors could have been a little better but they werent bad at all. good verse

vote- Kaos Theory
He took it with his punchs and metaphors





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