quit swaying votes damn, i voted on this battle fairly, i could care less who you or your opponent are. Im in it to spit and help others spit better thats it. I read your verse i got most of it. I felt like you lacked alot on it, i thought it was basic. You had alot of fillers that didnt direct as punchs. Your metaphors werent that hard. Yes you had personal shots but i didnt think they werent worded right....................

Maybe try and state them before the voting starts is you feel some one doesnt understand them. Or better yet try connecting things or maybe wording them diffrent. i went over your verse. I wasnt feeling it.

Sorry if you can take the feed back.

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