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Old 01-24-04, 09:10 AM   #14
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Not bad, not bad.. Freemna dawg iv seen u come much iller than this.. but it was keyed quick so props fo that.. i felt u were a bit simple an that opener was kinda nursery rhyme style.. havin said that ur 4th line use of multis upped the tempo a bit but u kinda fell off again.. not ur best verse basically but not bad.. Underrated set the tone wiv that opener.. witty an funny.. punches were consistant but the flow was a lil choppy at times.. but u came stronger an more original throughout an had a coupla quotables.. nice verse for a quick key..

VoTe = Underrated

Drop ur vote here plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108710

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