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Blindeye- Nope. Nope. Nope. Elevate, Visit WEC. You Needa Get Punches In Your Verse. Try Add SOme Multies, And THings No One Has Heard Of Before. Ok FLow, Bad Structure, Get ALl Your Lines Same Short Length.
Smoke- Nice Versse, Feelin Ya Verse. Ok Punches, Better THen BLind, Nice Wordplay. NO vocab, bad structure. But you took This Cuz Your Punches Actually Hit A Lil Bit...
Punches- Smoke
Flow- Smoke
Wordplay- Smoke
Opener- Smoke
Closer- BlindEye
Vocab- None
Overall- Smoke
Hit THis uP
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