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Old 01-24-04, 11:09 AM   #18
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Nice verse from both...
Fatal had some pretty creative and good punches
But he had some filler... get rid of that
You had good flow
Rock i wasn't ya shit till a couple lines in
Need to work on whats a punch homie

so

V/ Mirage