alright i'll say it like this..props to telekinetic much elevation since i seen him last...nice verse good punches they were witty and hard hitting....you just got a lil outclasses in this one....Tek nice verse really goood wordplay nice punches....some not pretty original......you want some constructive critisim i got some for ya...get rid off any line having to do with his dick .....the fact that he sucks dick....i mean u used them well but a real muthafucker is above shit like that.....Tele you came hard and earned my respect in this battle but tek been doing this for a while and just came even harder.....LOse the bolds i agree with sphere....peace out....