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Old 01-24-04, 12:14 PM   #13
Derive
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Mindtrap: Nice verse, you definately took avalon with the personals, you had a nice structure, but you had some played concepts, but you still took this

Verbal Kent: Couldnt catch your flow, i wasnt really feeling you verse, the best line was the TR one, but thats just about it.

V/ Mindtrap