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Old 01-24-04, 01:05 PM   #13
Dev
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Aus - your verse was nicely told, with a good use of vocab, well worded.... i liked the approach you took, and you stayed with it nicely thru... and it seemed well thought with feeling...
Born - i thought your approach was also good, but the flow fell a bit choopy in places, there was some nice wordplay, but the topic wasnt clear in spots, drifting a bit....
so im gonna vote=Aus, more concistent.... both were good tho
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