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Good Topical Battle.
I think Dev took this one.
You had a great sence and flowed with the subject very well.
Great imagery. nice story line to it.
You came at it at a slightly different way I expected...which was cool
I enjoyed the starting line...you opened up very good.
Good common sence piece
Big you had a good verse as well i just didnt think it was as capturing. it didnt move me as well as i thought it would have. although it was writtin well and a great aspect of common sence i felt dev just handled it a little better
Close but i'm goin with Dev he just made me think..and really grasped my attention
Vote. Dev
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