Straight Savage.
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Yeah..Dev had a strong piece, good vocabulary, decent flow and very nice presentation. My only problem is, That you got too into your lines and really made them seem forced which took away alot of the image.
Bigg, You had a nice piece, Your vocabulary not overdone and presenting strong images, and your flow was easy to follow regardless of line length. You got into your emotions a bit too much, some lines felt like they didn't belong and You had a decent ending.
Vote-Tough but Im going with Bigg
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