Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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i found that both pieces were well written, both had a good flow and vocab.
Dev's piece had a strong impact, but sometimes i felt a bit overdone,and forced, but it made me think thats for sure.
Bigg's piece was very emotional and did a good job showing imanges and describing his views.
all and all my vote goes to bigg
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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