Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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B.I- it was a nicely written story,flow and content were both good, and was strong and like said deep, i thought vocab could have been brought up some too.
mentill- content and vocab were good, but what i liked about your piece was how you approached this topic, and kept it interesting.
vote=mentill
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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