That was outstanding, your style and flow was on point i must say.
You brought a message to the table that has been brought before, many times,
but executed it with .... idk, something out-of-the-ordinary. Talent shone brightly thru this piece. Props for this one, keep writing, you'll have a reader.

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."