OMG... damn damn damn
this was.. I can't even find words to label it
everything was on point, you portrayed the emotion perfectly, kept the flow right, rhyming, deep, you brought me into the story. Real talented need i say the least. This was truly amazing. Keep writin.

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."