I didn't really care for this, like said above try sticking to one topic and just elaborate from there. But i too know how minds wander and everything seems to effect a feeling or situation, so I feel you on that. Your word usage/choice was kind of weak also, causing the piece, well to me, to lack emotion. The thought behind this piece was nice though. Besides what I stated above, it was alright. Keep writing, keep elevating.

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."