Token-reading your verse touched me..because I was over a cousin's house.. and for the first time..I've seen a women get beaten..and it'a horrible..so reading thise verse made me smile because the woman stood up..too bad my cousin didnt..anyway..you told a great story..I liked the ending..some of the lines were long and you tried to fix it by breaking it up, but it messed up the flow..overall..I give you a 8/10
whitelightning-
was up with your verse?..in my opinion..it sucked..it looks like you didnt put any real!! effort in it..like you just keyed it up..it looks like you was trying to tell a story..but it wasnt a good one..flow was the best thing..and even that was choppy at some point..so I give you a 6/10
vote token..