bane, good shit, tight punches, your intro was
dope dawg, i was feelim yo flow to, your structure,
was pretty good, but you need more personals, but
its all good, it was still good.

dizzy, you need to elevate dawg, you had some wack
punches, and your structure was horrible, flow was aight,
but still needs work, you had not one personal dawg, maybe
you should try tapdancing or somethin.

my vote: bane