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Old 01-24-04, 11:29 PM   #10
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Hmm... Aight battle... was expecting more though

Carson.. Ya punches could have been worded different for more effectiveness
I liked tha cock/window line.. Flow was sorta inconsistant.. structure was wack
You came with personals..which touched on his custom/sig/name.. connected okay
I've seen better

Ecoli.. Ya opener wasn't that great.. Like carson.. you could of worded it better
Came with a played line.. But besides that.. solid verse.. nice personals bout tha soundclick/9 to 5/and his post count... nicely done.. I liked ya closer too
Thought it was very creative...

so

v/ E.Coli

Hit this up please... Its being slept on big time.. thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...03&page=2&pp=15