This was real nice, I felt it. I like your style.
It wasn't too long, the emotion was felt, flow,
word play was all right. Message was clear, understandable.
Real nice read. Everything in this piece respectably
complimented your talent. keep writing, i'll read.

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."