you know what....N Litend i really liked ur peice
and if u had gone with the diary thing...
like have an omnicent voice/verse that sets
immagery that hes actually writeing in his diary
like hes sitting in his room and his face shifts, voice
that hes speaking while hes writeing,,,and nice coop to the
topic on the last line.
rule-nice place u took this, blissfull wich is somethings
that people dont go through because saddnesss, negative
hits the heart more....ya know? but it seems that u took
the topic to a goodplace and not tottally.gj.

vote-since i beilieve rule had better lines, took it to a
creative side, as where n could have taken it creative.
rule gets my vote
vo.rul.

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