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Old 01-24-04, 11:44 PM   #4
Menik
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This was ok.....structure needs some work though...try to shorten your lines up and keep them around the same length cause they seemed really stretched out there and it threw the flow off....had some alright multies, just try to work on that....but keep at it.
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