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Add A Teaspon Of Milk, Add A Cup Of Flower
And Cook For Half an Hour, Now We Baked Austin's Skills/
You Couldn't Cum Clean From Jackin Off In The Shower
Like A Whack Trilogy I Got Austin Powered/
Wow, Your A Coward...Afraid Of Text Match
I Wouldn't Count This Chicken Even If The Eggs Hatched/
But I Style Got You Wired, It What Got You Inspired
Plus I Keep Em Cummin Like I Was Nikki Tyler/
You Could Call Me A Buyer, I Got Your Verse Consumed
And Dead On Arrival Is What The Nurse Assumed/
But Dawg You lost this...But it wasn't Your Fault
Cuz You Mistook This Battle For A Poetry Contest/
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k overall 6/10 keep it up and come harder wit witty punches
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just by droppin uve beatin-urself, kid ur wack, gay ass bitch do urself a favor and retreat-for-help/
ill delete-ya-help, its quite sad when peeps wont listen to ya on the first time so u forced to "repeat-urself"/
this bitch is crossed, gay ass fag dressed in gloss, and its no wonder y this bitch is so hooked on "sauce"/
after this battle im left-as-the-boss and thats fucked up u gotta use the largest size just to get ya "message-across"/
even though i never said u could go 12 just go-ahead, cause u fit as many lines in as u can cause u know-ur-dead/
im just like that beast below-ya-bed, ur pissin me off, then u start to wonder y ya body is left "so-red"/
dawg its sad u startin to look like ya-avy, but its even sadder that to get ya weight, ud have to "have-three"/
u can-disagree, but damn ur fat and mexican the perfect qualities of someone i need to continue my killing-sprees/
i cant believe u didnt plan-before, cause i was expectin a challenge but u came out just a bland-bore/
dawg honestly u just a land-whore, u say u reppin the nyc, but really u cant even figure out what that "stands-for"/
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man yer struc is horrible fix that shit,overall 7/10
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vote/yo...
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