Thread: COM vs RULE
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Old 01-25-04, 04:44 AM   #7
Avenge
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Fuck'a Com got cut from Wits End..an complained for simpathy
In elite free agents..'wits end & O.I dropped you like soap 3?
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Hmmm... to long...didnt rhyme....Hes in wits end...and dropping soap=played
4/10

Com i read your battle with thesis..ye swayin votes like a bitch
Crying about how hes gettin dick rode and all that herbish shit
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Decent...not a very hard hitting punch
6/10

Your Wit's End is about to end say what you want diss rule
Cause your humour fell off When O.I dropped you for bein a tool
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Trying to hard fer personals....only 1 punch is needed about the crew thing
5/10

Complex this com an flex an school you in text ya fake vet
Regret bein a bitch yet and how your the only RB baby left
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wtf? an attemp at a multi? YOUR TEXT BATTLING RIGHT NOW punch was disgracefull
4/10

Regurgitated this bitch..bringin up your past tears was a must
I had to inform Rb coms an attention whore..
If he doesnt win he acts selfish..and sways for votes as a crutch
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swaying votes twice....you put an extra line which through off the scheme
5/10

overall 4.5/10 (dont rap like rap, bat, cup, slut) and use wordplay



Rule think's he'll win... but he's ten bars below par
We all know he's a bitch... all he's missing's the JA!
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good concept, wasnt worded right
6/10

Your first battle in this place... and the first of your defeats
How can you plan to keep pace?... when you haven't found your feet?
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OK line, try not to use the defeat/feet thing, nice flow
6.5/10

Rule wants to build a rep... then puts out that fucking shambles?
No-one picks up on ya wordplay... like knives without the handles!
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pretty ill...nice metta...
7.5/10

Cut from Wits End? when you thought of that did ya wig itch?
Read up on my history but didn't bother to read my sig bitch!
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ILL...nice little flip, and punch
9/10

You seem uninspired... You've shown no skill, I'll show the door
Click your heels... coz "Toto...we're ain't in topicals no more"!
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Nice....little personal...
8/10

overall 7.5/10

com wins Better verse overall
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