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Old 01-25-04, 05:39 AM   #7
LuMiNåRy Te-X-t
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GOod shit............ggreat vocab an rhyming obviously...
shit was sik..
only one of the few open mics ive peeped...an one of the better...

sum parts were a bit choppy..sounded lile a bucnh of words rhymein really.nuthin to stand out ..u gotta think of a bit better rhyme scheme n ya shit shud be off the huk..
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