rule... thought the opener was a bit played, and it didnt really rhyme... the verse was quite personal, thats good, but the punches didnt hit too hard... th closer was ok, but didnt like the way you presented it... overall... 5/10
com... liked the opener, amusing... and quite consistent punches... with some nice wordplay

Rule wants to build a rep... then puts out that fucking shambles?
No-one picks up on ya wordplay... like knives without the handles!
^^liked this bar... and i thought ya finished it with a good strong punch...

overall coms verse was harder hitting and more amusing...vote=com