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Old 01-25-04, 06:52 AM   #9
Theo Ginn
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V/ Token

token - lol nice story to your verse..like how she flips near the end..flows a lil blah at times but the rest is there...good shit

white - reads like you rushed your verse = / ...still it aint bad..a nice read with some god immagary..you were hitting the deeper approach on the topic just should have tried