TYPO
Yo, Iceman, I kinda feel bad for you my retarded friend//
Cause I'ma merk ya, have ya crazily screamin "this is the end"//
EHH...NOT A GOOD PUNHC WHAT SO EVER
I'm da final apocalypse, eruptin' ur ass like a volcano//
It's hot in hurr, but for Typo, droppin ya is no problemo//
OK.....not to shabby.....has potential
Your ass is mine, son, I'm gonna bomb your verse//
I'ma topple ya like WTC, don't even need to curse//
blah....was alright
For better or worse, but in this case the answer's clear//
Talkin' mad s**t, but behind the mouth I sense the fear//
bleepin out curses is gay, and the line b4 you sed u didnt need to curse?
I'm like the Muhammad Ali to your Mike Tyson, no contest//
Rope de dope to ur ear bite, easy to tell who's da best//
decent......still filler
From this fight there is no rest, you gotta keep comin' for more//
I'll probably get tired first, always poundin' your face in the floor//
ehh....poor attempt at a punch
This retard gets off by kissin' his own ass on a regular basis//
One man fan club, he's all alone feels like he's stranded on a oasis//
Dynasty Soldiers losin' their touch recruitin' people who be crap spittin'//
Pass me that tissue please, on this asshole I think I'm done s**ttin//
again dont bleep out curses and get some punclines....
overall not a good verse dissing and punch wise...ok vocab and rhyme....too much filler
10/20

IceMan
wins very easily.....i give him 17/20 for lines like this

" cut this emcee up like a knife through butter/
you scared to speak up, so you rap in mutters/
leave ya scared, so when ya talk u studder/
your not hot, imma give this newb the shutters/"

both of you need to elevate and work on structure and dope punches.....peacce....
maybe some multies whould help too