id say rule had an overall decent verse....i liked the humor of punches and personals....good strucutre...opener could have been better, and closer was pretty decent....i'd say it lacked in metas and harder hitting punches....there was a little filler..........so i'd say 6/10

com had hard hitting punches/personals especially the openeer......your creativity was killer....your strucutre was decent as was rules.....your metas were better than his.....
so were the punches and personals....overll.............8.5/10 ~ you win
vote - com

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