Hmmm, Tokens Verse Started Off Good, But Then Fell Off Towards The End...Imagery Was Ok, But I Wasnt Really Keen On The Concpet Chosen. It Was An Ok Verse.

White, Sorry, But I Wasnt Really Feelin Your Verse Much. Your Imagery Was Ok, But It Didnt Really Want To Make Me Read On And Get Into It More. I Was Expecting You To Win This.

Sorry, I'm Not Intending To Be Harsh Or Anything, Just Wanna See Both Of You Write To Your Full Potential.

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