i had ta reread it before i could speak on it...so i did..and now i can. i liked the ending..and i like the story...but i liked how it started the most...i was truly feelin it until bout...(Shut the hell up I’m tired of all these damn new scars)
after that line i kinda lost a lot of interest cus it wasnt about wut i thought it was but thas not any reflection of ur skills or the poem's quality...i liked the flow the back and fourth dialouge and the sudden interuption of wut u think its really about...lol..if u can read that the way it was meant to be read then u'll kno i liked the poem and i disliked it for the same reasons..lol..point is its nice u got skills...dont let ne one tell u otherwise...and dumping bodies isnt as easy as it sounds...-shi-

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Every lil boi is born shi......their ignorance makes them bold......

simply put"...wise words whisperd to deaf ears as no one hears the blurred proverbs that're always spoken clear so i fuckin swear that my where wont be here as time tolls..." second verse of 'Elevate' written by -shi-