Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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trust is a topic that coudl be written about in so many ways, and i enjoyed the way you decided to show it. it was well built and had good emotion and descriptions to it. lol and now i have that song stuck in my head ** i look inside myself and see my heart is black, i see a red door and i must have it painted black." anywho did a good job showing the trust topic in such a short story.
~TERA~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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