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This was a weak battle...you both need to try and elavate
Code..you had a okie verse.should of maybe re-worded some of your lines to make them stronger..try and get some personals..be creative..it helps a lot
but anyways your verse was okie..started off alright but went kinda sloppy...try use the 1 2 1 2 rhyme scheme...where every 2 lines rhyme not every 3 sound corny with 10 lines if you use 1 2 3...but good read.
Dizzy..okie verse..same things i said to code i'd say to you..you didn't have a much stronger verse..only on personal but i didnt think it was that good.
structure and flow...tie..punches..code..dizzy you had good punches if you woul have worded them differently..so im'a vote with code..keep elavaten
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