G Hod-I really enjoyed this piece. It was cool...it seemed like two different piece stuck together. This is so hard to critique. fuck. There was no emotion at all. I hated that about it. Micki didn't seem to have any feelings about any of what was going on, and that was just a pain in the ass. I liked how you worked the topic in.
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Something was glowing; seemingly something citing the past
& serving as a quintessential flashlight that was lighting his path
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very nice indeed. I think I misunderstood the message you were conveying overall though.
Termz-where G Hod lacked emotion, it seemed that your piece had so much that it lacked rational thought. Your wordplay was phenominal. I am still trying to understand what the translation of love is though.
v/termz