very nice

also

dixie i though tyou said you scrathed your self out,
and i set it up diffrently but i guess it's all ready started........


voting.......

this was good for a first round battle

the punches i give to dixie, you taking some what part of the set up for the tourney will get you further due to the fact you have the personals on your side a bit
meters you culd have done better i think if you used more creativity, that wich i think went to dixie
also the flow was nice from both of you but i think dixie is moving through to the next round.

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