Gotta go with Wise Ways, no hate here. What did it for me was the more traditional approach, punches that landed well because of a well-balanced structure. Just a good battle verse, nothing really too memorable like in some of his other verses, just good sticking to the basics.
, I like your style, it's your own and i understand it's difficult. I think it's tight. Try your best not to sacrifice punches for the flow though, never a good thing to do. Maybe fix your structure up a little bit, people vote on that on this site. And dont' capitalize like that, some vets think it herbish.
Good battle guys. Drop a vote here, : ) already did but i think he forgot to poll
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