Ahhh...merk job. Someone's been here for a while and someone hasn't. Physik, you know how to elevate and battle, just keep it up. Good structure, punches, i enjoy reading your shit.
DNV, you need to seriously work on punches and structure. Stay up though kid, no one has complexity when they first start. Good battle guys.

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