viscosity-hmmm...this piece was very well constructed. It had some quality lines. It just seemed like you were rambling though...didn't really bring the topic to life.

mad man- I like the idea of falling and then saving yourself at the last minute. This piece was so dope, largely because it can be related to lives of a lot of people. good job.

v/mad man

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