jae roc-fix your structure man.....your verse was hard to read wit that structure....and u didnt have any real good punches in ya verse.......fix the structure that is your main problem

true-u had an ok verse your punches hit ok........fix your structure as well......get rid of the -'s........but u had a decent verse

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hit this wit a honest vote

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