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Old 01-26-04, 03:50 AM   #4
Intoxicated
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The thing is... i'm smokin YOU, yet im bad for your health/
your verse was funny... but the only person who laughed was yourself/ **
wack emcee... I'll smash ya bones to dust ... sprinkle it on my weed and then smoke a blunt/
roast you up...consider me a drug dealer... i'll stab u in the back cuz i dont go for fronts/
I know you aint an architect... jus look at that structure n format/
I'll puncture ya thorax... smash thru ya ribs n into ya lungs wit a war-axe/
get it together... ya words are broken up more than highschool couples/
Optimus rap?? he'd be better in 'pop'... like his 'rhymes were bubbles'/
whatll u find in the rubble?? Op couldnt dig for ideas if his mind was a shovel/
He had to find himself trouble, but i can see wackness anywhere ... like my eyes are the hubble/
even tho alotta ya lines, been 'round longer than some bottles of wine...
It's still not as bad as naming yourself after a cartoon called Optimus Prime/


I'll end it there...
VOTE PLEASE
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