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Old 01-26-04, 04:22 AM   #16
Telekinetic
Poetic Justice
 
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Mat- You need PUNCHES badly. Go to the wackness emergency center. Your verse was just rhyming. No comlex shit at all

Lyric- You got the right idea. Your punches were still weak tho. Try to be more clever in your shit. Use harsh personals. Shit that would get ya teeth knocked out if you said to sombody. lol

OVERALL- Lyric got this. He had punches in his verse. Elevation needed tho