Yes, blasé it was; but the eire about the piece and yourself seems a bit charismatic, which is a good thing. A UK-propaganda piece, this reminded me of something Messiah would write; he, being my favorite of the Internet artists, would be something worth learning from, man. It had a unique flow, adequate vocabulary & no major word choice problems - just a few here and there. Get up a bit of a more complex array of writtens, & I see yourself earning a spot in the ranks. . Good Luck

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P.S. I'm the owner of a certain topical league that could use some new talent - AIM: RalphsBagels, if you are at all interested.

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