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Old 01-26-04, 09:17 AM   #22
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Vote Goes To IceMan...Although He Could Have Done Way Better..And Needs To Work On His Structure....Throw More Punches..And Don't Come So Easily..Even Though He Was A Newb..He Could've Easily Beaten You Because You Came To Simple Buddie.

Typo....Umm..Well You're New So I'm Not Gonna Go To Hard On You...Make Your Punches More Complex And Harder..Don't Do This "S**t"...Don't Do This "//"...Make Your Bars Shorter....Thats About It..Decent Verse To Be New..But You Did A Hint Of Feeding...

Iceman Said
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shit this fag dont need to curse in his verse/
cus it will only make his shit sound worse/


And You Said
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Your ass is mine, son, I'm gonna bomb your verse//
I'ma topple ya like WTC, don't even need to curse//


And Then You Turned Around And Cursed....Don't Do That...

Vote - IceMan...He Had An Overall Better Verse.
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