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Old 01-26-04, 09:30 AM   #8
Verbal Kent
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Originally Posted by MC PINACLE
Good piece...at points, the bars were fucked up, very odd, but then again as The Realest mentioned, it would be better on Audio...Nice wordplay and metaphors in this piece...need to elevate with the vocabulary in my opinion...nice work man...
Check out mine, return the favour..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109651




Has been noted... but the only thing I can't respect is the "need to elevate with the vocabulary"... cause honestly... I have a wide vocab range... but why use it if it isn't needed..? Nothing about you... it's just... shit about vocab is one of my pet peeves...



it doesn't really matter... what matters is how you put it together... I could literally say 'hifalutin' in a joint but why..? I could just say egotistical... n' people would not only understand it better... but identify with it quicker and that way they could get down to the true meaning of what I was saying... All in all... vocabulary can help... but sometimes henders... know how to use it... and get it done...
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