thought i agree with you maven on an emotion side of things.. I dont think
that speeches really had everything he needed to pull over Hod here. Im not
saying that it was bad, because it wasn't.. yet lacked information and on the
creative sides of things, i think koaltee edged you out here.

Koal..
It was a good piece and the fluency of the words had me grabbed into the
peice you told. It put things into perspective and you ended your piece nicely

Termz..
another good piece.. yet sometimes the structure of it lacked into me following.
I was trying harder to get locked onto the structure (rhyme scheme) than i
was trying to get hooked onto the story. Although when i did, it portrayed a
different side of the topic which was good to see.. just not taking hod here

v/ Koaltee